We got the call that you never want to get
Your dad’s not well so you better get here quick
Money was scarce and resources were low
But family comes first so we must go
We rented a car and left early in the day
And headed for lands, to us, far away
The sun was bright and the weather was cold
The weatherman’s prediction of no snow was bold
We drove all day and into the night
Through state after state with no snowflakes in sight
We finally made it to New York State
The night was dark and the hour was late
Then the snow began to blow
Across the lanes moving to and fro
No other cars in sight for miles and miles
We began to get worried, we lost our smiles
No cars, no trucks, not even a house in sight
Had everything else on earth gone to bed for the night?
The snow was blanketing everything and deep
No restaurant or gas station or Inn for us to sleep
After hours of solitude we found a small diner
With two lone customers, one sporting a shiner
We asked how much further til we reached our destination
She said just a couple more hours to that station
By the time we reached the place we were going
The snow was feet deep and still blowing
All stores and restaurants were not visible from the cars
As the snow piled so high it seemed to reach the stars
Ice on the insides of windows appeared
As across the frozen lakes the ferries veered
The snow finally stopped but left in its wake
A mess the likes I could never dream to make
The locals continued on their daily course
No fear of the deep snow, no vocal remorse
We Southerners were not used to such weather
And couldn’t wait to get back to a climate much better
This post was brought to you by Mama Kat’s Pretty Much World Famous Writer’s Workshop and prompt #5) Write a poem about a snow memory.
Your poems amaze me! You are so talented. Love the snow memory and those pics. She is so cute!
I have an award for you, if you do those 😉
Awww thanks Angelia! I really appreciate that! I really struggle with the poetry so that makes me feel better. I do do awards (I said do do…hehehe I’m such a dork!). Thank you and I’ll be right over! 🙂
Bright side…the snow is pretty!
It was but it was scary deep. The pics were like the 2nd or 3rd day after we got there. It was crazy.
That picture looks…cold! I am shivering just looking at all of that snow. Sheesh. Thoroughly enjoyed your poem!
Thanks Arnebya! It was VERY cold. There was ice on the inside of the car glass WITH the heater running full force. I’ve never been so cold in my life!
“Sporting a shinner” LOL! Ouch!
Great poem! Amazing how you got it to rhyme. It must have been hard to do. Congrats! 🙂
Like you said…. sporting a shiner may have stretched the truth but for the sake of rhyming! LOL Thanks for the vote of conifdence because I always find poetry so hard. Thanks for stopping by!
Wow … I’m so impressed you were able to keep up the rhyme scheme through the whole thing! I couldn’t do that! I hope that the trip ended OK … it didn’t sound like it happened for the happiest of reasons.
Thanks Jenners. It wasn’t the best trip but at least my husband got to see his father before he passed.
Did you get to the person in time?
I think you didn’t give yourself enough credit (regarding your reply on my site) Great job!
Thanks. We did. My husband got to spend a couple of days with his dad before he passed. It was a sad occasion but I’m glad we made the trip.
Such a well written poem. I would have had to pull over for the night and stay somewhere, you were very brave!
Thanks Emily. But the fact that we were on a last minute trip we had no extra money to stay anywhere for the night and we literally did not pass anywhere once the weather got really bad and we had already paid in advance for the place we were headed!
I like the poem. The pictures are incredible. So much snow. I am not a fan of snow. Visiting it, yeah, sure. But I decided long ago that I couldn’t live in the snow. There are people that like it so it works out.
I don’t think I could live in a place with that much snow either. My nerve for driving in the snow left long ago!
And snow is cold and messy. 🙂
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